2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

There is no doubt that it'se definitely inevitable to create a green campusfor the reason that we will benefit a lot from this action.For instance,not only can we strengthen our bodies in green campuses,but also our grades and quality will be improved more easily. However,it's important for us to understand what Creating a Green Campus because green campuses not only mean a good environment.What's more,they also include the good communication surrounding as well as the nice relationship between teachers and students. when it comes to how to construct a green house,I think not only us students and teachers,but also the governers should be involved.For example,the executives can invest more to promote the facility of school.What we students can do is to protect the environment as well as get along well with our teachers and classmates to create a harmonious atmosphere.