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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；若注意一些语法错误，文章会更漂亮。
According to a recent survey,there is dramatic increase in number of museums that be open.Why is it?As we all know that we can get knowledge from books and internet with the rapid of economy,additionally,maybe it brings us many benefits,also,making us power.However,this is incapable of taking place museums.Firstly,museums,in which we can know how the history of going,also,we can have a right away to face our further. Nonetheless,some problems will be brought.One of the most common factors in that fewer and fewer museums are support by government,so it must be make profit.If free,the will have no income,besides,the goal of most visitors are low quality,maybe the will be littering or spit everywhere,it is not easy be control. Last but not least,in my view,I firmly agree that free admission to museums,in addition,having a good control that a person quality,such as littering or spitting everywhere.In reality,we still have a long way to go.
