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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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What is the most important thing between people?Trust will be the right answer in our minds,and you can't doubt it,it's the truth.And trust is not only the most important thing for us--human beings,but also for the entire creatures ion the world. Trust is not just a word,it's a faith in our heart to believe,not even to ourselves,but also to other people.And it is a very helpful thing to us keep relationship with someone.With trust we can say some secret to our friends,to let them help us get rid of upset.And it is a useful thing for us to work with other people about our work.So it is very important for us during the daily life. Trust gives us hope,faith and safe,it is an important thing for us to get what we want,and keep our heart warm and feel the wonderful word by our heart.

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