2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Nowadays,education pays has aroused hot discussion.Some people think the deucation pays is useless,But others argue mantain that the education pays is essential for individuals who want to succeed. Form the picture ,we can get some informations about relation between unemployment and education pays. Firstly,the people who have bachelor degree and more than bachelor degree weekly earnings is much than average society weekly earnings.As same time ,their unemployment rate is lower than average unemployment rate.Secondly,the people who have less than high school diploma weekly earnings is lowest and unemployment rate is hgihest.Thirdly ,the people who have professional degree weekly earnings is higher than doctoral degree and their unemployment rate is lower than doctoral degree. Form these information,we could conclude that as society developing, we must improve uorselves with knowledge.Because knowledge is key to our future life and job,especially prfessional knowledge is most important.In a word ,the education pays is useful.