2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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computer and man i think computer is a good thing for us ,beause we could not do something ,but the computer be able to do what the one who could not do it .oh ,god ,i am so glad that i have a beautiful computer,i can do a lot of thing by it.