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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较好的使用一些学术词汇，同时要避免个别拼写错误；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
We are the new generation of the new century.Because of this,we take the responsibility of building our country and communicationing with other parts of the world for our motherland.It is really a important project that we teenagers are in need of growing up healthily . How we can do this?My opinions are as follows.First of all,we should form a optimistic attitude towards life.Whenever we face challenges,this kind of attidude is needed by us to go through these problems.It also helps when we feel living in the darkness.To get more knowledge and enrich our horizen,we are supposed to study hard.In the future,rich knowledge and wide horizen lead to ideal jobs and success. Last but not least important,heath is the key to our success.We are required to exercise every day so as to keep healthy and energetic.Some of us think it is no need to do some sports.You should know if we don't have good body,we may never finish our dreams. In conclusion,we need to try our best to be a healthy,hard-working and active person .I hope all of us can succeed in the future.
