2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,education pays has aroused hot discussion.Some people think the education pays is useless,But others argue maintain that the education pays is essential for individuals who want to succeed. Form the picture,we can get some informations about relation between unemployment and education pays. Firstly,the petrson who have bachelor degree and more than bachelor degree weekly earnings is much than average society weekly earnings.As same time ,their unemployment rate is lower than average unemployment rate.Secondly,the person who have less than high school diploma weekly earnings is lowest and unemployment rate is highest.Thirdly ,the people who have professional degree weekly earnings is higher than doctoral degree and their unemployment rate is lower than doctoral degree. Form these informations,we could conclude that as society developing, we must improve ourselves with knowledge.Because knowledge is key to our future life and job,especially professional knowledge is most important.In a word,the education pays is useful.