高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

My favorite sport is football.I fell in love with football by chance.One day i picked up a football when i went home .Then i asked my friends to play football together .From then on playing football becomes my favorite sport .I often practice and hold football game with my classmates. My favorite football star is Back Ham .I wish i can be a good professional football player one day.