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拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
With knowledge and technology development,more and more people study English with computer. They think that used this way to help ours have more comfortable and effective in our study and work.Online become the increasing number of peoples like used computer and make people,which not staying in same place ,communication with other people become more convenience and quickly.And some of worker think they can find kinds of information that help to do homework. However,some people not believe it.They think that this have a lot of game in Internet.Younger play game by computer more than work.Play game used them lots of time.So have college student study not interest and grade become decrease.Some parent awareness this problem.They not agreement their children used computer in they daily time until they finished they homework or in weekend. In my opinion,People's work,study and leisure quickly when Internet be more used than past.We can communication with my partner in my need. But we shouldn't use computer playing game long time. Equitable distribution time is important with our working and living.
