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拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
With knowledge and technology development,more and more people study English by computer. They think that used this way to help ours have more comfortable and effective in our study and work.Online business become the increasing number of peoples used computer and make people,which not staying in same place,communications with other people become more convenience and quickly.And some workers think they can find kinds of information that help to do homework. However,some people not believe it.They think that this have a lot of game in Internet.Young people play games by computer more than work.Play game used them lots of time.So have college student study not interest and study score become decrease.Some parent are not aware this problem.They not agreement their children used computer in they daily time until they finished homework or only play games in weekend. In my opinion,People's work,study and leisure quickly when Internet be more used than in past.We can communicate with my partner in my need help. But we shouldn't use computer playing game to spend long time. Equitable distribution time is important with our working and living.
