2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

In accordance with a recent survey,there is dramatic increase in number of museums that are open.Why is it?As we all know that we can be knowledge from books and internet with the rapid development of economy,additionally,maybe it brings us many benefits,also,makes us power.However,this cannot substitutes for it.Firstly,museums,in which we can know how the history is going,also,we can have a right attitude to face our future. Nonetheless,some problems will be brought.One of the most common factors in that fewer and fewer museums are supported by government,so it must make a profit.If free,the will have no income,besides,the goal of most visitors are low quality,maybe the will be littering or spit everywhere,it is not easy be control. Last but not least,in my view,I firmly agree that free admission to museums,in addition,having a good control that people quality,such as littering or spitting everywhere.In reality,we still have a long way to go.