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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As is known to many people, there is a will, there is a way.It is nearly impossible to achieve success if a person does not have a strong will. There are three reasons why a strong will counts.Firstly, a strong will is a important pledge of success.A person who has no goals or dreams will not try his best to realize them.Secondly,only people who have a strong will can complete great motion. Great tasks are always full of difficulties and risks, only do people make up their decisions can they execute their plans without scare.Last but not least, it is same with us students , we have to work hard ,otherwise we will not become the beams of our country.And the motive that push us go along is our strong will. In a word, a strong will is such a significant essential in our life ,which can bring us power, push us go forward, and lead us to success. So, to be a winner ,to have a strong will.
