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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；作者用词生动多样，请继续努力，请仔细检查单词拼写；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。
With the development of science and technology, it seems that our daily life has becomed more cozy. On the contrary, the quality of our life is decreasing, especially in motropolitian compared with that before industrial revolution. The factors can be associated with the recently serious issues, which can be found all over the world. The first one I think is environment pollution, human being intend to develop the economy and indeed they got what they wanted, but in the cost of water, air pollution in the past two years. This phenomenon is prutruding in big cities and because of this people's health condition is affected. All kinds of diseases just come up out of nowhere and infect us. The rapid development of society facilliates our daily life, meanwhile it also put more work stress on our shoulder. We need to work so hard to keep up pace with society. Thus, how to ease the above three issues is urgent. Aimming at pollution issue, technology can be used to elleviate the
