2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文中词汇使用较丰富，但学术词汇使用太少；可适当增加从句使用，注意极个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

You can't cling to he past,because no matter how tightly you hold on it's already gone. But why am I still feel maudlin?What is the reason for the weather or something else? Time is a circus,always packing up and moving away.It's winter again,in addition to the time and age has changed,something else is still in place. The people and things that we think will not forget it it inadvertently gorgotten.Those we thought would not do the thing will come when you least expect them to do.Life is hard but amazing,everything we experience are carefully packing gifts,so we must take seriously even not-so-glamorous.Stop complaining and then continue moving forward.