2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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The phenomenon of excessve packing Nowadays,many businessman give their commodity with excessive,which aim at more profit.we can see a mooncake that usually pack with high-grate tin box,we can see several fruit in a beautiful blanketmade of metal,we can see a big biscuit box only have a bit biscuit,and so on.All of above phenomenons will distract our earth for waste too much resourse.sometmes we demand article appearance excessively,which give businessman opportunity to make benefit from meet your need.Because we think give a considrate present to other that more reflect your sincerity ,in fact,present need to true heart and not outside wether grant or simple. my opinion,we are supposed to simplify the packing and persuit simple and environmental protection .Especially ,fesitaval present packing box or other recyclable material shoud be recycled to repeate use.