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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。
In accordance with a recent survey that a great deal of people can be knowledge from the Internet with a rapid development of economy.Additionally,the Internet,in which we are able to search plenty of messages from all over the world that becomes possible.On the one hand,some people believe that the Internet will make perfect on studying and working.On the other hand,while others firmly argue that that teenagers surface the Internet.Nowadays,in this essay I will discuss the disadvantage of using more the Internet and offer my own view on it. To begin with,teenagers are old none too who cannot control themselves that the time of of surfacing the Internet.Besides,so that unfavorable effect on teens academic performance.It is mostly factors. Last but not the least,from my perspective,I do hold that net will make our study as well as work better and better.Moreover,everything has two coin.It is necessary that people surface the Internet with right attitude,cannot have a long time in it.However,all it takes is the right attitude that have a long way to go.
