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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Education Pays, from the picture we can see that Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates. With the development of the society, education become more and more important. In nowdays, without having knowledge, we will can't catch up with the society's progress, we need to learn knowledge to improve ourself. So government should pay more attention on the education.
