作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
The impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication All of the world is in a period,a period of Internet.The computer is the most useful thing that the scientist invented.But of the Internet,the computer makes it work. As we all know,the Internet changes our life now.It is not just a system,but a useful tool to help us do our jobs,connect with our friends and relatives and download videos and pictures,etc.Of course,the most of our time is Interpersonal Communication.We don't need to see them,just by the Internet,then we can talk with each other.During our work,we can negotiate with our partner by the Internet,to get our goal. Even though the Internet is so useful and helpful,it is still has negative segments.We always connect with others by Internet,so the feeling that between person and person are so cold.I think we should talk with other face to face,it is a better way to keep a warm feeling .
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