Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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In this chart,we can see the data for persons age 25 and over from Bureau of Labor Statistics,Current Population Survey.We can conclude that education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.Doctoral degrees has the lowest unemployment rates and professional degrees has the highest weekly earnings in 2011. In my opinion,the years we do the research can not be wasted.We learn knowledge and know how to learn by ourselves.Firstly,the longer we learn at school,the more serious the employees think us.When we spend our time learning,that represents that we can refuse playing computer games,watching TV or movies,shopping with others and other things for fun.We can learn quietly not being disturbed by others,we can also concentrate on working.Secondly,the higher education we receive,the higher quality we are,that's the reason why persons with higher education are different from persons with lower education.So the employees do like the applicants with higher educations.