拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词;连词使用偏少。
The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication the internet will impact a lot of people , especially for the young people. It makes people do not communicate by talk just by type words. Many young people watch the screen of the computer all day. They rarely talk with parents or friend that give rise to more and more people indifferent. There is phenomenon, some one can communicate very well in internet, when they talk in true life do not how to talk well. The situation will be very embarrassed. So people addicted in the internet world is bad for our daily communication. in my point of view, i encourage people spend more time with friends in real life. We can enjoy our life by face to face.
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