题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。
Honest is one of a good traditional charecteristics not only to Chinese people, but also to all the people in the world. Trust freind when you are in a friendship, trust lover when you are fall in love, trust companies when you eager to success. Maintaining trust means have faith to someone or something without any doult. Nevertheless, it is the closest relationship between two persons. If only you have much knowledge to somebody, can you maintain trust. In a certain degree, maintaining trust is dangerous cause if you could never make sure everyone in the earth is considerable. However, it's necessery to maintaining trut to people. Humans are gathering animals, and during your life you would meet countless persons.What's more, you must have many trubles to wait for someone's help, in this condition, trust is crucial. trusting like a rose, though it has thorn, it's amazing.