广东江门市福泉奥林匹克学校2013届九年级试卷英语作文附范文

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I love travelling.I have been to Guangzhou，Shanghai，Beijing and so on.But i enjoy the trip to Shanghai best. Shanghai，an international city，is located in the east of China.Great changes have been taking place in Shanghai in the last ten years.With its world-famous landmarks such as Jin Mao Building,the Oriental Pearl TV Tower and Lujiazui finanicial centre,Shanghai has become a modern city.If you enjoy shopping,you can visit Huaihai Road which are called"shopping paradise".If you enjoy delicious food,you can visit Yu Garden where the local snacks are waiting for you.If you enjoy sightseeing ,you can visit the Bund that have beautiful and romantic views.At the same time,the convenient traffic enables you to travel freely and go to some place quickly.I firmly believe that Shanghai is a popular tourist destination. In brief,it is a really relax that I travelled to Shanghai!