题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
Honesty is one of a good traditional characteristics not only to the Chinese people, but also to all the people in the world. Trust freind and your friendship will get closer, trust your lover and your lover will pay you back, trust companies and you will more possiblely to success. Trust means you have faith to someone or something without any doult, that is, it is the closest relationship between two persons. If only you have much knowledge about somebody, can you maintain trust. In a certain degree, maintaining trust is dangerous, cause you could never make sure that everyone in the earth is relyable. However, it's necessery to maintaining trut to people. Humans are gathering animals. During your life, you would meet countless persons.What's more, you must have many trubles to wait for someone's help, in this condition, trust is crucial. Trusting like a rose, though it has thorn, it's amazing.