2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Oline Shopping In the modern society ,more and more people have a tendency to go shopping on line.They do not have to go out ,and they can buy something so easy.It will save people more time to do other thing . Although oline shopping have many convinence,there still have some disadvantages.For example ,you can not see the real goods before you get it .At the same time ,you do not know the quality of goods.And if you buy some clothes or shoes,you may get wrong size,because you have no chance to try on .Sometimes,you may get cheated by others,such as buying false or goods with low quality. In my opinion,we should take online shopping serioesily and have a positive and right attitude to it.