Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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In the wake of the development of our education,there is a common phenomenon in the world that the number of people who receive less than high education is increasing, while the number of these people who rceive higher education is decreasing.From this figure above,we can see that there is a gap between uneducated people and educated people. Educated people earn more money than uneducated people in a week.