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GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

发布时间:2013-07-19 16:34浏览次数:8494
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Directions: Present your perspective on one of the issues below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.  “The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”

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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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As I grew older I really realized that fools rush in where angles fear to tread courage was gone.We considered too much,worried too much,everything had to consider the results.For example,I want to wear slippers,pajamas go out because that comfortable,but we have to consider other people’s gossip.If you are a kid people will ignore your dress but you are not. Some people saying,twenties are squandered youth’s age,you can hedonic,do what you want to do and ignore the possible consequences. I admit that I have been fallen,at that time,I was without thought,without ideals,like without soul.I want to put down everything to travel,about money,house,car,I just have only words to say,screw you! Up till now on,I still have no courage do that.I think I am really not brave enough.

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