2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

As I grew older I really realized that fools rush in where angles fear to tread courage was gone.We considered too much and worried too much and everything had to consider the results.For example,I want to wear slippers,pajamas go out because that comfortable,but we have to consider other people’s gossip.If you are a kid people will ignore your dress but you are not. Some people saying,twenties is squandered youth’s age,you can hedonic,do what you want to do and ignore the possible consequences. I admit that I have been fallen,at that time,I was without thought,without ideals,like without soul.I want to drop everything to travel,about money,house,car,I just have only words to say,screw you! Up till now on,I still have no courage do that.I think I am really not brave enough.