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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17432[网页划词已开启]
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分85.0分
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拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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At the contemporary society,human can not avoid being influenced by computers.Modern life is closely bound up with computer,for we can conclude that whether we work or study largely depends on computer. Work efficiency has been improved a lot with the help of computers,and many scientific projects which seemed impossible in the past have been achieved.It is computers that make our life more convenient .people can rarely accomplish their work if their computer was broken. There is no doubt that computers play an essential role in our life. It is certain that computer helps accelerate the pace of the development of society,however,it has many side effects as well. Lots of people rely on computer, losing the basic living ability. That some computer users have been addicted to computers is a big headache for their family. Computers also set a block for human communication, for instance, more people are apt to chat online instead of face-to-face talk. How to deal with the relationship between computer and human being is a great wisdom for us.

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