Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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As I grew older I really realized that fools rush in where angles fear to tread courage was gone.We considered too much and worried too much and everything had to consider the results.For example,one day I want to wear slippers, pajamas go out, because it comfortable to wear, but we have to consider other people’s gossip.If you are a kid people will ignore your dress but you are not. Some people saying,twenties are squandered youth’s age,you can hedonic,do what you want to do and ignore the possible consequences. I admit that I have been fallen,at that time,I was without thought,without ideals,like without soul.I want to put dowm everything to travel, about money,house,car,I just have only words to say,screw you! Up till now on,I still have no courage do that.I think I am really not brave enough.