Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As I grew older I really realized that fools rush in where angles fear to tread courage was gone.We considered too much and worried too much and everything had to consider the results.For example,one day I want to wear slippers, pajamas go out, because it comfortable to wear, but we have to consider other people’s gossip.If you are a kid people will ignore your dress but you are not. Some people saying,twenties are squandered youth’s age,you can hedonic,do what you want to do and ignore the possible consequences. I admit that I have been fallen,at that time,I was without thought,without ideals,like without soul.I want to put dowm everything to travel, ignore the house,car,money. Up till now on,I still have no courage do that.I think I am really not brave enough.