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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As I grew older I really realized that fools rush in where angles fear to tread courage was gone.We considered too much and worried too much and everything had to consider the results.For example,one day I want to wear slippers, pajamas go out, because it comfortable to wear, but we have to consider other people’s gossip.If you are a kid people will ignore your dress but you are not. Some people saying,twenties are squandered youth’s age,you can hedonic,do what you want to do and ignore the possible consequences. I admit that I have been fallen,at that time,I was without thought,without ideals,like without soul.I want put down everything to travel. Up till now on,I still have no courage do that.I think I am really not brave enough.
