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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
As I grew older I really realized that fools rush in where angles fear to tread of courage was gone.We considered too much and worried too much and everything had to consider the results.For example,one day I want to wear slippers and pajamas go out, because it comfortable to wear, but we have to consider other people’s gossip.If you are a kid people will ignore your dress but you are not. Some people saying,twenties is squandering youthful's age,you can hedonic,do what you want to do and ignore the possible consequences. I admit that I have been fallen,at that time,I was without thought,without ideals,like without soul.I want put down everything to travel. Up till now on,I still have no courage do that.I think I am really not brave enough.
