Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;适当增加一些复杂句的使用,文章会更棒;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As I grew older I really realized that fools rush in where angles fear to tread of courage was gone.We considered too much and worried too much and everything had to consider the results.For example,one day I want to wear slippers and pajamas go out, because it comfortable to wear, nevertheness we have to consider other people’s gossip.If you are a kid people will ignore your dress but you are not. Some people saying,twenties are squandering youthful's age,you can hedonic,do what you want to do and ignore the possible consequences. I admit that I have been fallen,at that time,I was without thought,without ideals,like without soul.I want put down everything to travel. Up till now on,I still have no courage do that.I think I am really not brave enough.