Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
As I grew older I really realized that fools rush in where angles fear to tread of courage was gone.We considered too much and worried too much and everything had to consider the results. Some people saying,twenties are squandering youthful’s age,you can hedonic,do what you want to do and ignore the possible consequences. I admit that I have been fallen,at that time,I was without thought,without ideals,like without soul.I want put down everything to travel. Up till now on,I still have no courage do that.I think I am really not brave enough.