2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

Nowadays, online shopping is very popular with us , there are lots of advantages for us. firstly, it can save time when we buy something from internet; secondly , it is more cheap than shop ; what is more , it is also can provied more kind of things for us . But at the same time , it also cause many troubles . sometimes , when we buy something online, the shoper is not very criedit , we may be cheated by them, besides that we may recieve things taht we had bought, it not like the picture that we watched online. and so on . As far as i am concerned, there are somethings should be take into consideration, we should creat a good criedit system, in order to prevent us from being cheated. The banker should inspect the seller once a mouth . last but not least, as for ourselvies, we should improve our attation to others.