2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping In the era of information and technology,the Internet is more and more porpular,with that the online shopping has become a fashion. Online shopping has played an important role in our life.it has many benifes,such as it save a lot time in go around all place to buy wonderful clothes