2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；文章词汇使用比较恰当，学术词汇积累不足；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

As the development of computers,more and more families now own one or more computers. We use computer in variety of fields,such as finding informations,releaving yourself,shopping and so on.Our life becomes much easier as we use it.For example,when we miss someone we can use the computer to send messages to him or her,even we can see each other through it.It can make us become much closer. Although it benefits us all,we need to know it also has many backwards.First,there are many students absorbed in computer games.All they want to do is just sitting front of the computer and play computer games.It is very harmful because it is time to study rather than to play games.Second,if you use the computer all day,we may endanger our health.It is unhealthy if we sit beforea computer all day.We should do some exercises to make our body work smoothly. Every coin has two sides,and there is no exception to computer.So we should learn how two make use of it but without any bad effects.