题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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As we all know, everyone needs confidence which is the most precious quality among people's varieties of merit. people with confidence will be happy from the deep heart and do everything actively and also will gain satisfactory from other people. Another cherish merit of people is trust, which is believing in ourselves or others. But why we need trust? Why we should maintain trust? In the world, animal and people all need trust, we need someone believe in us, then we have a wall to depend on, we will do things confidently. Trust is the thing between two kind of people, such as husbands and wives, children and parents, students and teachers. Husbands and wives should have trust in each other. They both think the other is the only beloved one in their life, they trust what the other said, done or whatever. Then their couple life will be merry and harmony