题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文中词汇表达多样性不足,在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累;全文结构较为严谨;有效的运用了一些复杂句;请注意分段。
as a society human being ,it is very important for us to trust others.if one man could not trust others,the situation must be terrify ,in other word,the only thing he could do is stay at home and prevent against any one he may touch.so how we let others to trust us and which situation in we could trust others.in my opinion,the most important thing is to be honest and the government assume that by build a honest system.what's more,talking is another efficient way to build the trust among us.