题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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As we all recognize, everyone needs confidence which is the most precious quality among person's varieties of merit. Person with confidence will be happy from heart deep and do everything actively and also will gain satisfaction from other person. Another cherish merit of person is trust, which is believing in ourselves or others. But why we need trust? Why we should maintain trust? In the world, animal and people all need trust, we need someone believe in us, then we have a wall to depend on, we will do things confidently. Trust is the thing between two kind of people, such as husbands and wives, children and parents, students and teachers. Husbands and wives should have trust in each other. They both think the other is the only beloved one in their life, they trust what the other said, done or whatever. Then their life will be merry and harmony. Trust also requires between children and their parents. When children want to do something by himself or herself for the first time, we parents should not stop them for their safety or making much troubles. The right way is to believe in them and let them go, it could not better to give some encouragement to them. Then parents will surprisingly find out our children did a good job unexpectedly. Students and teachers also need trust, for one thing, students should have the belief that their teachers are qualified to teach them well and their ability to learn well. For another, teachers should believe every student is a genius in some aspects and students can gain progress through teacher's trust and efforts they make. Trust is a indispensible advantage that people badly needed. We should have belief in other persons, to encourage and help them when they are in difficulties. At that time, our trust is just like pretty sunshine in the cloud day, making them feel warm and confident. Therefore, everyone should take part in the activities on maintaining trust.