2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

能够熟练使用从句并合理分配；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；作者词汇表达的灵活性要加强，且注意拼写错误。

In our whole life,we will have one or more goals lead us to achive.And there are different ways to sucess,choose the right way to achive is the important thing to who wants to get it.Not all of the ways are to sucess,but it is an experience to us during the period. We all know that to do something is easy for us,but to do it good is hard.So we should make our mind before we choose the way to do the thing,what is the meaning of doing it,and how to do it,which way should we choose?These questions are the first step,when we check them out someday,then we can do the next step.The way to sucess is hard,but we can't afraid of it,we should face it bravely,because our human beings can do anything,when we make our mind.We can't always wondering that in our mind,we should do it in pratice.The way we choose should step by step,then someday we will see the fabulas sucess we get. As I say,sucess is not easy than we think,so we have to make hard work to let it happen,and I think if we do our best,we will get what we should get.