2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Nowadays it's usual to see goods on excessive packaging.The same goods that are in different packaging sell at different prices.The more excessive packaging,the more expensive they are sold. Although people know the goods are the same,they prefer to buy the goods on excessive packaging.The most important,they think the goods which are on excessive packaging are on higher banks.When they bring them to their relatives and friends,it looks like a compliment to them. In my opinion,when we bring gifts to other people,however small the gifts are or however poor the packaging is,the goodwill is important.It just ok that they know our regard.The excessive packaging waste a lot of resources.We cut down trees to make our packaging paper.But we know trees are important for our environment,they protect the earth.It's no reason for us not protect them.Let's cut down the excessive packaging,proving the goods quality is the prior.It's everybody's responsibility to protect trees and our environment.