2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Nowadays it's usual to excessive packaging of goods.The same commodity different packaging different prices to sell.The more excessive packaging,the more expensive they are sold. Although people know the goods are the same,they prefer to buy the goods on excessive packaging.The most important,They believe that the excessive packaging of goods is high grade.When they bring them to their relatives and friends,it looks like a compliment to them. In my opinion,A goose feather sent from a thousand li away the gift itself may be small, but the goodwill is deep.They know our mind is enough. Excessive packaging waste a lot of resources.We cut down trees to make our packing paper.But we know trees are important for our environment,they protect the earth.It's no reason for us not protect them.Let's cut down the excessive packaging,proving the goods quality is the prior.It's everybod