2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(36):A Meaningful Activity

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Nowadays, our shool is holdong a meaningful activity calls "bad habits farewell and meet civilization ".In order to reduce the number of uncivilization behavior and constructe a harmonious campus atmosphere.Ranging from holding book exhibition to making dormitory decorations, from having a competition of classroom beauity to wearing shool uniforms . and etradicate some uncivilization behaivior such as dropping litters ,smoking and drinking.In concliusion,I hope i can contribute to this activity.