2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

从句使用量稍显不足；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions? As the development of the society, people got many benefits from the society such as the convinient traffic, food ,medical service and good education.Meanwhile, everything has two sides, we are also in the risk of the facing many problems caused by the development of the society such as the pollution, healthy problem and work pressure. Firtly, the world is polluted when we develop our society.More and more people drive, the the air become more and more dirty.People pour the dirty water to the river and later eat the fish from the dirty river.So,secondly ,people faced a big problem that is the heathy problem ,people eat more things ,practice less than before.There are many fat people in all over than before.And there are many cancers than before. Thirdly, the fast society need the fast behavier and thought,so every professional worker face a big pressure.From above, we can see that even the development of the society, our quality of life is decreasing. How to resolve these problems? In my opinion,we should protect the environment when we develop the techonogy,we protect our home when we develop the society. We should pay much attention to our healthy and learn to pactice and learn to relieve ourselves. Life is the most important thing we should protect. In a word, we work for our lives,don't lose our goal.