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My views on Online Shopping As it is known to us all,online shopping has become a fashion.It's pretty easy to find that our classmates,our teachers,our parents are shopping online for the reason that it's so convenient to shop online that we even don't need to go out and we can buy what we want.What's more,goods online are always much cheaper than those in shops.As a conseqence,we can save much money,which encourages us to do shopping online. However,every coin has two sides.Although online shopping do have many advantages,we have to admit its disadvantages.For distance,since we can only see the goods through virtual internet,it's definitly difficult to judge the real quality of the goods.Moreover,there is no doubt that con men do exsit on internet so we have to protect ourselves from being cheated. When it comes to my opinions on how to avoid being cheated online,I firmly believe that we'd better choose websites that have a good reputation.Last but not least,it's inevitable for us to protect our rights if we unfortunitely suffer cheats online.
