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Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags Nowadays,with the rapid development of technology,the environment population get more and more worse,so there is a heated discussion that did we should limit the use of disposal bags. Different people hold different ideas,some of them think the plastic bags make it convenient for our life,when we need pack up some liquid food or dirty things we can use it.so they think it very useful for our life. But there is an another vioce,they think we should forbid using the plastc bags,our environment is getting worse and the plastic bags are account for apart .in order to let our word avoid get worse ,so we should try our best to limit the use of disposal bags. I can't share the idea that we shouldn't stop use the plastic bags,the bags have bring many bad efforts,so in my opinion i think we should limit use the plastic bags.