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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9788
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文章层次较为清晰;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。

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Nowadays, wherever you are, you can see that the phenomenon of excessive packaging. Using beautiful stripe and tissue paper decorate and package goods. There are sevelal causes of excessive packaging. On the one hand, many companies believed that they can attrach customers' attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits. On the other hand, many customer mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging excessive packaging. In my opinion, I think that has bad consequences of excessive packaging, including rising interest rates or connot ensure quality and with false propaganda to deceive customers. To solving the problems, it's necessary to take the follows measures. Firstly, costomers to boycott the excessive packaging of the products. secondly, the government should enhance the strength of law enforcement and propaganda.

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