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My Views On Online Shopping In recently,more and more people pay attention to shopping in the internent.Nowdays,Online Shopping has been become a fashion. There is some advantages on online shopping,first of all,customers shopping online can take great convenience of them.Secondly,it is more cheaper than shopping in usual. Although online shopping have more advantages,but it still have some disadvantages.Such that the sellers don't send out the goods on time or some of the goods it is different from the internent. In my view of this situation,effective measures is that we can choose the good sellers in reputation to buy.