2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My Views On Online Shopping In recently,more and more persons pay attention to shopping in the internet.Nowadays,Online Shopping has been become a fashion. There are some advantages on online shopping,first of all,customers shopping online can take great convenience of them.Secondly,it is much cheaper than shopping in usual. Although online shopping has more advantages, it still have some disadvantages.Such that the sellers don't send out the goods on time or some of the goods it is different from the internet. In my view of this situation,effective measures are that we can choose the good sellers in reputation to buy.